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even as we drown
you refuse to take my hand
sea salt stings our eyes
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LobodeSanPedro
Published
3rd Feb 2014
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case28
(Alexander Case)
3rd Feb 2014 10:01am
Sounds like the chilling realism of the titanic going down. Painful drawn with deft touch, LSP.
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LobodeSanPedro
3rd Feb 2014 9:14pm
Not as many bodies as the Titanic lol ... but indeed painful
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
3rd Feb 2014 1:47pm
A variety of meanings come to my mind why she wouldn't take your hand. Love the double entendre such as drowing = the ending of relationship, sea salt = tears. Impressive!
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LobodeSanPedro
- Edited 3rd Feb 2014 9:20pm
3rd Feb 2014 9:19pm
You certainly picked up on all caveats of the piece ... Why? ...that is the mystery of it all - another layer
Thank you for the RL add
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