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Colours, darlin'
Manifest in all your colours, darlin'.
I
believe
in
you.
and we are forever tick-tocking. let us survive -
this time.
I
believe
in
you.
and we are forever tick-tocking. let us survive -
this time.
Published 20th Feb 2011
| Edited 24th Jan 2016
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20th Feb 2011 10:08pm
I don't know, but you made it pop with colour and life. Short, but it works. Good job with this.
21st Feb 2011 12:07pm
Anonymous
20th Feb 2011 10:43pm
I hear this one...I feel this one..
Nice work LA,
Steven
Nice work LA,
Steven
21st Feb 2011 12:11pm
21st Feb 2011 1:34pm
i see it, the colours pop somehow! it's optimistic and encompassing in a relationship. beautiful acceptance, and really, love. if this is your writer's block, I live in mortal and envious dread of your rush. (in a good way) [:
21st Feb 2011 1:40pm
21st Feb 2011 7:11pm
What a beautiful way to emanate how it feels to fully embrace the moment spent with another. Time is an illusion, yet inevitable. The only option we have is to enjoy the time we spend waiting.
21st Feb 2011 8:33pm
