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Here I Am
lonely and alone
in my loneliness
my thoughts are
powerless to pain
there's no purpose
to this empty room
imprisoned by me
my heart is caged
i cannot afford to
share what's left
love has vanished
leaving stained tears
you are gone forever
I'm still so alone
in my loneliness
my thoughts are
powerless to pain
there's no purpose
to this empty room
imprisoned by me
my heart is caged
i cannot afford to
share what's left
love has vanished
leaving stained tears
you are gone forever
I'm still so alone
Published 31st Jan 2014
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31st Jan 2014 1:45pm
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31st Jan 2014 2:34pm
Wow sweets you're too Pretty to be by yourself!!
But Shit does happen..
Awesome write and read sweets!!!
Sir Lancelott
But Shit does happen..
Awesome write and read sweets!!!
Sir Lancelott
31st Jan 2014 3:49pm
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31st Jan 2014 4:03pm
Sooo wistfully sad!
The depth, of your expressed emotions, reaches out to your readers on such a personal level.
Perfectly Penned...with pain straight from your heart!
(Hoping smiles find you--soon!) :)
The depth, of your expressed emotions, reaches out to your readers on such a personal level.
Perfectly Penned...with pain straight from your heart!
(Hoping smiles find you--soon!) :)
31st Jan 2014 8:55pm
It's nice to hear DarkEnchantress, thank you very much for your kind words. I am greatful. :)
31st Jan 2014 5:19pm
I can truly empathize with your deep yearning and emotion. I echo what DarkEnchantress wrote. You truly are unique in that your poetry is is a true glimpse into your life and soul. I feel fortunate to visit your world.
31st Jan 2014 8:58pm
GW I appreciate you!Thank you my friend for always being a kind voice, your thoughts are always welcomed! :)
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31st Jan 2014 7:41pm
Nice!! I have felt this feeling before sweetheart, Again nice write. No worries Tommie I’m still here for you babe!
31st Jan 2014 9:01pm
Some say being alone is good, I say sometimes!!Today isn't a good day.Thanks DrLove. :)
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1st Feb 2014 2:35am
It's one good talent to be able to write with just few words in each line. You got it. Nicely written.
1st Feb 2014 2:13pm
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1st Feb 2014 8:23pm
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1st Feb 2014 8:38pm
1st Feb 2014 10:57pm
Lonely is the heart love has vanished
like passing of days. Time heals all wounds
scars are all you've got now
keeping you alive
never letting you forget. This is awesome Tommie Lynn
like passing of days. Time heals all wounds
scars are all you've got now
keeping you alive
never letting you forget. This is awesome Tommie Lynn
1st Feb 2014 11:02pm
2nd Feb 2014 2:53am
loneliness compounded. it's amazing how big & crushing that feeling can get...
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