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Blades
I can feel you slice my skin
tasting that high you give me
Making me feel free
trickling down the inside of
my thigh warm and slow
I can feel the poison leaving
my system with one deep cut
Sending shivers through me
living without having to
deal with the moments
tasting that high you give me
Making me feel free
trickling down the inside of
my thigh warm and slow
I can feel the poison leaving
my system with one deep cut
Sending shivers through me
living without having to
deal with the moments
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Re: Blades
31st Jan 2014 1:59am
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31st Jan 2014 2:03am
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31st Jan 2014 8:37pm
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31st Jan 2014 7:14pm
Beautiful words. Nicely placed.
There's a difference between writing about your pain then hurting yourself.
I'm just concerned though . . .
You're just writing about it
and not planning on doing anything . . .
you know?
There's a difference between writing about your pain then hurting yourself.
I'm just concerned though . . .
You're just writing about it
and not planning on doing anything . . .
you know?
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re: Re: Blades
31st Jan 2014 8:39pm
No worries.Thank you for your words, I truly appreciate it!And thank you for reading D_M0ndE99. :)
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6th Feb 2014 11:41pm
Razorblade touches in the right places, without immetiate help, will drain life every time.
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7th Feb 2014 00:27am