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How many more times?
Maybe im wrong to love you
But do i want to be right?
Could it be that im a fool
To cling to you so tight?
How many more times must he hurt you?
Before you can give me a chance?
How many times must you give me the boot
Before you can give me your hand?
How many more time must i cry
As friends and family me watch me die?
By you, my earnest love denied
How many more times must i try?
Maybe i'm just being selfish
Wanting your total submission
But my dear i cant help it
My desire has clouded my vision
I guess i cant expect you to just jump into my arms
Even though i promised you i'll never do you harm
We just need to spend more time together
If i could cause your heart to spark
Then we could shine together
You are a vision so divine
Why cast your pearls before the swine?
You'll always be my valentine
If only i could make you mine.
But do i want to be right?
Could it be that im a fool
To cling to you so tight?
How many more times must he hurt you?
Before you can give me a chance?
How many times must you give me the boot
Before you can give me your hand?
How many more time must i cry
As friends and family me watch me die?
By you, my earnest love denied
How many more times must i try?
Maybe i'm just being selfish
Wanting your total submission
But my dear i cant help it
My desire has clouded my vision
I guess i cant expect you to just jump into my arms
Even though i promised you i'll never do you harm
We just need to spend more time together
If i could cause your heart to spark
Then we could shine together
You are a vision so divine
Why cast your pearls before the swine?
You'll always be my valentine
If only i could make you mine.
Published 30th Jan 2014
| Edited 31st Jan 2014
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31st Jan 2014 4:33am
When you are in love with a person who is attached to another, the pain is overwhelming. People got to make their own mistakes before they can detached themselves from a co dependent relationship. And you need to take all this heartache and turn it into beautifully twisted art like this. Great write. Thanks for sharing.
yea.. im struggling withthe fact that shes done it to me twice for the same jerkoff. so were back talking again but if she does it to me again.. idk.. i cant keep doing this to myself.. she knows hes a cheater and she knows ill be faithfull. its a tremendous blow to my sself esteem that she, knowing that, would still kick me to the curb.
31st Jan 2014 10:36pm
We're all fools for love sometimes, Raven!
...and a love that makes you wait, cry, turn it's back on you, deny you, isn't really love.
I really like how thick the emotions are in this piece. Nice!Xo
btw.... "As as friends and family me watch me die?"<---revamp
...and a love that makes you wait, cry, turn it's back on you, deny you, isn't really love.
I really like how thick the emotions are in this piece. Nice!Xo
btw.... "As as friends and family me watch me die?"<---revamp
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21st Feb 2014 8:50pm
"How many more time must i cry
As friends and family me watch me die?" Been there, done that, Raven. Great truth.
Thinking about this type of a situation, if you were to switch and put yourself in their shoes.
And then, what if you found yourself always running away and leaving someone who is always there to seek out someone else, perhaps you would feel that there was something missing about the person you keep straying from?
To find true lifelong happiness with someone, there needs to be commitment on both sides. No time to waste, life is short.
...imagining that this is a "first love" because don't they always go that way?
Check out Gloria Gaynor's - Never Can Say Goodbye lyrics.
As friends and family me watch me die?" Been there, done that, Raven. Great truth.
Thinking about this type of a situation, if you were to switch and put yourself in their shoes.
And then, what if you found yourself always running away and leaving someone who is always there to seek out someone else, perhaps you would feel that there was something missing about the person you keep straying from?
To find true lifelong happiness with someone, there needs to be commitment on both sides. No time to waste, life is short.
...imagining that this is a "first love" because don't they always go that way?
Check out Gloria Gaynor's - Never Can Say Goodbye lyrics.
21st Feb 2014 10:09pm
yea your right mate. but i feel like even if i am wasting my time. even if it hurts so fuckin bad.. it kinda feels worth it if theres some small glimmer of hope that shel one day be with me. but part of mes had enough of the hearache.. im pretty twisted inside i admit
12th Apr 2014 2:59am
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