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Simple, Surreal, Attainable
Desire first
Love follows
Hand holding on the avenue
Simple, surreal, attainable
It’s right when you float
Texting from across the room
That one and only look
That lets you know
You are living
And breathing
Holding on for each moment
In the iconic love affair…
Love follows
Hand holding on the avenue
Simple, surreal, attainable
It’s right when you float
Texting from across the room
That one and only look
That lets you know
You are living
And breathing
Holding on for each moment
In the iconic love affair…
Published 28th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
29th Jan 2014 00:38am
Nothing like sending messages across and there are more ways than one to do so.
29th Jan 2014 1:51am
This was based on a friend's relationship with his wife. They sat side by side and texted each other while watching a movie. That is commitment.
Glad you enjoyed
xx
Glad you enjoyed
xx
29th Jan 2014 00:40am
29th Jan 2014 1:52am
Thanks T
Tasteful or distasteful, that is the question.
Took the high road this time ...
xx
Tasteful or distasteful, that is the question.
Took the high road this time ...
xx
29th Jan 2014 00:58am
I really liked your last stanza... your words reverberate behind my chest x
29th Jan 2014 1:52am
29th Jan 2014 6:04am
29th Jan 2014 12:49pm
29th Jan 2014 3:54pm
It’s right when you float
Texting from across the room
That one and only look
That lets you know
I love this. This was beautiful.
Texting from across the room
That one and only look
That lets you know
I love this. This was beautiful.
29th Jan 2014 4:07pm
