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Sometimes
Sometimes I will act
Like I want to get away
From myself
And your touch will not be able to soothe me
But if you wait a little while
The greyness of my face will break into a smile
Like I want to get away
From myself
And your touch will not be able to soothe me
But if you wait a little while
The greyness of my face will break into a smile
Published 24th Jan 2014
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24th Jan 2014 12:51pm
The last line was perfect.Made this little poem feel tender, that's how I read it.Enjoyed Jswiss.
24th Jan 2014 2:06pm
Deep appreciation for reading my work Tommie. You, PoetSpeak and Heart_of_Glass are becoming my family here.
24th Jan 2014 1:29pm
Yes, tender is the word to describe this write.
Cracks in the ice my comrade
Nice job
Cracks in the ice my comrade
Nice job
24th Jan 2014 2:07pm
24th Jan 2014 1:53pm
24th Jan 2014 2:08pm
Heart, my comment to Tommie above is for you as well. Thank you for reading.
24th Jan 2014 4:20pm
24th Jan 2014 9:03pm
24th Jan 2014 7:23pm
....we are our own worst enemy, sometimes. Can't run from yourself. I like how you noted that a little time to gather your thoughts and emotions, is all one needs...Xo
24th Jan 2014 9:02pm
I'm my own worst enemy most of the time. But I don't run anymore even in my dreams. I have to be better for my daughter. Hold it together. Not slip off the deep end of despair and self-loathing that gripped my life for so many long years.
Thank you for reading and commenting. :)
Thank you for reading and commenting. :)
