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Losting virginity at siteen
Losting virginity at siteen
You are sixteen 1962 born
The year of the Tigress
that's why your poetry is
charmingly ferocious ..........inspired by LDiva
SOME LOSE IT
IN LA VEGAS
some at home
but all love to lose it in
Vatican or Rome
NICE
recalling that night
we all some day
have to lose it
but to the one we love
it's a delight
so you have a memory of it
beautiful alright
all through the night
of life[/b]
You are sixteen 1962 born
The year of the Tigress
that's why your poetry is
charmingly ferocious ..........inspired by LDiva
SOME LOSE IT
IN LA VEGAS
some at home
but all love to lose it in
Vatican or Rome
NICE
recalling that night
we all some day
have to lose it
but to the one we love
it's a delight
so you have a memory of it
beautiful alright
all through the night
of life[/b]
Published 24th Jan 2014
| Edited 27th Jan 2014
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24th Jan 2014 1:31am
I like what you did here regarding that important rite of passage in ones life..... :)
Thinking about it now brings warmth to my heart and a smile to my face..... <3
Thinking about it now brings warmth to my heart and a smile to my face..... <3
24th Jan 2014 1:47am
thank you Scarlet
you must thank lady LD
for the inspiration
Glad u liked it
just a quickie
this
as is all my poetry
of my cuffy
you must thank lady LD
for the inspiration
Glad u liked it
just a quickie
this
as is all my poetry
of my cuffy
24th Jan 2014 4:13pm
24th Jan 2014 7:52pm
