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my snow fall

this isnt really a sadden or a pained story, but this girl named snow i've met her at the woods walking listening to eyes on fire by blue foundation her pretty colorful hair, the looks of her beautiful eyes and her voice, god her voice, she look at me with a bright smile my face being all red cause of me being shy. "Hi there wanna walk with me" she said. Me turning bright red and stays silent for a bit and replies"i'd love to!! whats your name"
she smiles and holds my hand and pulls me to walk with her and giggles. "Im candace but you can call me snow" smiling and walks with her still holding her hand and pokes her side. "snow... i like that name" she giggles and i chuckle "im jacob but you can call me bluefire" she giggles more and holds my hand tighter and says "tell me about your self i know you have had a tough past huh?" gives a serious look and holds both my hands "well snow actually i have and im still going through it i cant do anything im just a teenager..." snow looks into my eyes with a sadden tear wanting to escape her eyes " bluefire... im sorry your going through so much pain i wish i can be there for you." my eyes start to flood with my tears as i hide my face from her wanting to just go home but she wont let me, "bluefire look at me in the eyes, look at me" i look into her eyes and eyes start to water more... she looks back into my eyes and she pressed her soft tasty lips against mine and i pressed my lips against hers in a soft tenderly kiss holding her close to me and holds her hand and walk away with a smile on my face, and now we walk on the earth ready to take on the world. forever together and forever in love.
                       i am jacob ramon vladimir juarez
      Dedicated to the love of my life
         Snow, aka Candace
              i love you forever my snow fall
Written by Black_bullet
Published | Edited 24th Jan 2014
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