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His Wrinkled Bed
his thumb
pressed
against my
lips he drags
it to my chin
breath empty
hollow
hot in his
mouth
wet with desire
body to body
his wrinkled
bed was
made for me
it's where
he discovers
the lady in me
it's where I
let him
be a man
as his
sweat falls
upon me
glistening upon
my skin
pressed
against my
lips he drags
it to my chin
breath empty
hollow
hot in his
mouth
wet with desire
body to body
his wrinkled
bed was
made for me
it's where
he discovers
the lady in me
it's where I
let him
be a man
as his
sweat falls
upon me
glistening upon
my skin
Published 22nd Jan 2014
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23rd Jan 2014 00:00am
Wow! You make me not want to make the bed again Tommie! Great write, enjoyed it.
23rd Jan 2014 1:09am
23rd Jan 2014 00:00am
23rd Jan 2014 1:10am
23rd Jan 2014 00:09am
is it the result of deprivation
that erects imagination
I wonder
the wonderful unmade bed
if taken a virgin would be red
that erects imagination
I wonder
the wonderful unmade bed
if taken a virgin would be red
23rd Jan 2014 1:11am
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23rd Jan 2014 1:13am
I love the flavour of your writing, my favourite part:
his wrinkled
bed was
made for me
More please :)
his wrinkled
bed was
made for me
More please :)
23rd Jan 2014 1:18am
You're words are great...I really do appreciate it Heart, :)
Thank you so much.
Thank you so much.
23rd Jan 2014 1:30am
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23rd Jan 2014 1:44am
Classy and sensual. I have to say my favorite line is: "it's where I let him be a man"
I really enjoy your writing! :)
I really enjoy your writing! :)
23rd Jan 2014 1:49am
23rd Jan 2014 2:07am
That fourth stanza is wonderful Tommie ...
his wrinkled bed is made for me ...
Just lovely
LSP
his wrinkled bed is made for me ...
Just lovely
LSP
23rd Jan 2014 2:15am
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23rd Jan 2014 3:02am
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23rd Jan 2014 3:11am
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23rd Jan 2014 3:12am
Always a pleasure having you read me and thank you for your kind words LD. :)
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23rd Jan 2014 7:09pm
Chooooow. Very well short, simple and filled with good imagery. Great write.
24th Jan 2014 1:29am
24th Jan 2014 3:27am
I know where the Lady is. It's words like this that close the gap babe. You know what I mean. Thank you Tommie. XO
24th Jan 2014 3:31am
24th Jan 2014 7:59pm
"His wrinkled bed was made for me" - favourite phrase, could be read in more than one way.
24th Jan 2014 9:54pm
26th Jan 2014 1:11am
Mmm so sensual mmm i lay upon the bed of thus piece drenched in the sweat of it ink beautiful Tommie Lynn
26th Jan 2014 2:17am
