Pull on my Velvet Rope

Intense power write.

You have so much depth in your writing.

Really vivid piece, read it a few times.

xo
Speak

Thank you, you're too kind PS.

PS isn't being kind but accurate. ;)

The turn in words was intense. The combination of setting up a flowing sensuality and then "killing, tearing his heart softly" to the end of the poem left me with an impression of a some otherworldly orgasm...I really don't know how else to put it. And then the very end "so he can float around me" gave me a sense of celestial orbiting of bodies. There is a feeling I have reading this that I can't describe, and that feeling had me reading it again. "until I feel his hurt" this line got me too.  

Now you're being too kind Jswiss.I thank you for your wonderful words!
This is a taste of the blues.A sexy woman making love to her man with her smoky voice.Taking his pain and filling him with, well herself. There's something about the blues that's just so damn sexy.

Ahhh.. Use the velvet rope to tie us together my lady! Nice write my lady... sensual indeed!  

Glad you liked it Dirtfarm, thanks for reading me.

it's like a
Valentine present
all wrapped up  
two in one
a gift from u to him
all in a gift wrap packed in  

this is a new concept of tearing
or read it as tear-ing love
hope u have understood my interpretation
of a kind of unrequited love

modern love does not  have much salt

I got it A... no worries.Thank you

Thanks for reading Dirt. :)

The first two lines grabbed me babe and didnt let go. Great write sweetheart.

Thank you DrLove, I appreciate it.

I love the descriptions in this piece./ It kinda reminds me of that old Roberta Flack song, "Killing Me Softly." Recently redone by Lauryn Hill.

Love that song, I sing it all the time!I appreciate your words GW, thank you for reading.

with every smoky
word I sing,until he's
ready to explode,

really enjoying your ink, you write some stunning pieces TL x

Truly appreciate you reading me Heart.Thank you.

U are so awesome man I love how u put this i hung myself with it

I thank you so much BS :)