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Luna Magic
The full moon blossoms above, I
feel it's endless love saturate me
His hand pulls me to the earth, my
skin warm and moist from his touch
As the breeze carried my scent, he
inhaled my perfume and held it in
Surrounded by natures green,prisoner's
of the pale moon's passion
In the dark he gathers my body, never
leaving any part of my flesh unkissed
Like a serpent he's smooth, making
me glow from the inside out
Our moans echoed in the air, some
soft and light most heavy and hard
When our shape becomes one, and we
extract every bit of nectar from one another
Suspended under the moon in night shade,
we rest planted in the richest of soils
feel it's endless love saturate me
His hand pulls me to the earth, my
skin warm and moist from his touch
As the breeze carried my scent, he
inhaled my perfume and held it in
Surrounded by natures green,prisoner's
of the pale moon's passion
In the dark he gathers my body, never
leaving any part of my flesh unkissed
Like a serpent he's smooth, making
me glow from the inside out
Our moans echoed in the air, some
soft and light most heavy and hard
When our shape becomes one, and we
extract every bit of nectar from one another
Suspended under the moon in night shade,
we rest planted in the richest of soils
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Re: Luna Magic
21st Jan 2014 3:08pm
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21st Jan 2014 4:57pm
Re: Luna Magic
21st Jan 2014 4:31pm
Loved reading this one. Especially love: "prisoners of the pale moon's passion"
I felt the extraction of nectar....
I felt the extraction of nectar....
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21st Jan 2014 4:58pm
Re: Luna Magic
21st Jan 2014 9:56pm
Mmm tht is very beautiful the art of two becoming one as the moon cradles both souls. Wow awesome
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22nd Jan 2014 00:10am
Re: Luna Magic
22nd Jan 2014 00:43am
wow...
In the dark he gathers my body, never
leaving any part of my flesh unkissed
Love this :)
In the dark he gathers my body, never
leaving any part of my flesh unkissed
Love this :)
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re: Re: Luna Magic
22nd Jan 2014 00:53am
Re: Luna Magic
22nd Jan 2014 00:50am
I'm with you Tommie Lynn. This puts me in a place. The right place. I'm feeling you. Just beautiful Lady. Thank you again doll. XP
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re: Re: Luna Magic
22nd Jan 2014 00:59am
Glad to hear it Twitch, as always I thank you for reading me.
And your wonderful words. XO
And your wonderful words. XO
Re: Luna Magic
22nd Jan 2014 3:24am
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22nd Jan 2014 5:56am
Re: Luna Magic
22nd Jan 2014 3:46am
I too was moved by "never leaving any part of my flesh unkissed"
And "we extract every bit of nectar from one another" is simply delicious :)
I love the natural setting as well
And "we extract every bit of nectar from one another" is simply delicious :)
I love the natural setting as well
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re: Re: Luna Magic
22nd Jan 2014 5:58am
Re: Luna Magic
22nd Jan 2014 6:01am
In the dark he gathers my body, never
leaving any part of my flesh unkissed
between the said and unsaid of lines like these our own lips become the light that drenches all your flesh to glow in it's blood pumping glory
leaving any part of my flesh unkissed
between the said and unsaid of lines like these our own lips become the light that drenches all your flesh to glow in it's blood pumping glory
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re: Re: Luna Magic
22nd Jan 2014 6:19am
Absolutely Semaj.So glad you stopped by to read me, thank you for your words.
Re: Luna Magic
22nd Jan 2014 8:19am
lovers & poets can never resist the moon, & if you are both, fireworks!...
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22nd Jan 2014 1:00pm
Re: Luna Magic
22nd Jan 2014 3:10pm
You made a man look at the damn moon in a whole new light! Will be naked for sure next full moon... Right on with this write!
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22nd Jan 2014 6:37pm