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Fuck more
[b]Fuck more
Strangers fuck
remorselessly
they just want to burst
inside your
unknown valley
and explore
[b]one more
to add to their score[/b]
no less, no more
they fuck you more
the next time again
them you lure
fuck more
[/b]
Strangers fuck
remorselessly
they just want to burst
inside your
unknown valley
and explore
[b]one more
to add to their score[/b]
no less, no more
they fuck you more
the next time again
them you lure
fuck more
[/b]
Published 20th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
20th Jan 2014 5:36pm
The last verse tapers off into semi-coherent ramble. The "unkown valley" image, though a little funny at first due to its (I assume) unintentional innuendo, is quite effective, as it evokes an image of a lonely traveller. I'd recommend expanding that image.
9th Apr 2014 2:16pm
sorry for the late expansion
i was busy with others
in another mansion
women can only help
in expansion
at any point of mating junction
if a guy needs an extension
I do it only for fun
jammed i get
when expansion is none
all is in fun
intended fuckin pun
i was busy with others
in another mansion
women can only help
in expansion
at any point of mating junction
if a guy needs an extension
I do it only for fun
jammed i get
when expansion is none
all is in fun
intended fuckin pun
