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down to the bone
not much time now
getting down to the bone
my life burned to ash
praise to you poet
who will chew the remains
of my charcoal soul
in your wet mouth
and spit-spray a story
on the walls of these caves
just to say i was here
getting down to the bone
my life burned to ash
praise to you poet
who will chew the remains
of my charcoal soul
in your wet mouth
and spit-spray a story
on the walls of these caves
just to say i was here
Published 20th Jan 2014
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28th Jan 2014 1:04am
Thank you. I keep finding myself using the same basic set of words to spit my "truth" on the walls . I would like to try what you accomplish in some of your compressed yet dense verse.
31st Jan 2014 00:51am
