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Velvet Love
There's no taming my passion
rest inside me, let everything fade
just remain within me.I hold you
deep, as you kiss the moon in
my eyes, you look with insane wonder
and we both ask "is this real?"
It was real, raging with chaos and
echoing with rumbling vibrations.
We shall truly feel it one day, not just
in our words, or thoughts, but on our lips,
your skin to my flesh, your hands
to my nakedness, my velvet love to
your dedication.
rest inside me, let everything fade
just remain within me.I hold you
deep, as you kiss the moon in
my eyes, you look with insane wonder
and we both ask "is this real?"
It was real, raging with chaos and
echoing with rumbling vibrations.
We shall truly feel it one day, not just
in our words, or thoughts, but on our lips,
your skin to my flesh, your hands
to my nakedness, my velvet love to
your dedication.
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Re: Velvet Love
19th Jan 2014 3:33pm
I feel this to my core.
Tender and Erotic
Nobody says it better, than you ....
Tender and Erotic
Nobody says it better, than you ....
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19th Jan 2014 4:52pm
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19th Jan 2014 5:20pm
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19th Jan 2014 5:47pm
Re: Velvet Love
your hands
to my nakedness,
my velvet love to
your dedication.
without any reservation
nor
hesitation
wonderful exotic neat and clean etc
to my nakedness,
my velvet love to
your dedication.
without any reservation
nor
hesitation
wonderful exotic neat and clean etc
1
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19th Jan 2014 7:04pm
Re: Velvet Love
19th Jan 2014 7:47pm
with words like these...you make "one day" so imatient to wait for...I love this Tommie...excellent write...very loving...
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19th Jan 2014 8:18pm
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20th Jan 2014 00:13am
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20th Jan 2014 2:04am
Loud and clear Angel. Loud and clear. Time can only hold for so long. Thanks Tommie. XO
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20th Jan 2014 2:14am
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20th Jan 2014 2:43am
my velvet love to
your dedication.......
u breed pure erotica
is it ur auto experience.
I wonder still
your dedication.......
u breed pure erotica
is it ur auto experience.
I wonder still
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Anonymous
20th Jan 2014 2:27pm
eyes puttin loshun on itz skinn rm!
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