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invasive sex
invasive sex
24000......ejaculations...126 ....... poems ...36 ..days
Energizing vines... with steely juices
I now see
the imagery of sweetness
Rain grants to ones imagination
all, I can now add
after having read
Great poets above
is that I'm adding this
to my Reading list....
It makes me feel small
using expletives
we,
only learn from generations
newer ones
like from you
as one is laid
Let heavens Rain
more acidic rain
from you
as the body curves
like a snakes
as it takes
Ref My Body Is Yours to Take....by Rain.
Again corrections
I was fed
the sweetened feed
and
the longer lead
so I’ve told
again
to refrain
now I’ve amended/amending
where necessary
the words
exploding
all again
and
desirably again
sorry
my genre is not only this
duo intertwining
except here miss
many read me daily elsewhere
but the reads
I have earned here
in such a short period
make me explode
so I now implode
after
so many full loads
24000......ejaculations...126 ....... poems ...36 ..days
Energizing vines... with steely juices
I now see
the imagery of sweetness
Rain grants to ones imagination
all, I can now add
after having read
Great poets above
is that I'm adding this
to my Reading list....
It makes me feel small
using expletives
we,
only learn from generations
newer ones
like from you
as one is laid
Let heavens Rain
more acidic rain
from you
as the body curves
like a snakes
as it takes
Ref My Body Is Yours to Take....by Rain.
Again corrections
I was fed
the sweetened feed
and
the longer lead
so I’ve told
again
to refrain
now I’ve amended/amending
where necessary
the words
exploding
all again
and
desirably again
sorry
my genre is not only this
duo intertwining
except here miss
many read me daily elsewhere
but the reads
I have earned here
in such a short period
make me explode
so I now implode
after
so many full loads
Published 19th Jan 2014
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19th Jan 2014 5:19am
19th Jan 2014 5:28am
19th Jan 2014 5:23pm
well...i never expected to have to edit a response...just goes to show, there's a first time for everything...so thanks for the edit...much appreciated...no harm, no foul...
it is important to know where we stand..yes?
:)
it is important to know where we stand..yes?
:)
19th Jan 2014 5:57pm
