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Night Out
Over the top last night
had whiskey and beer with my music
and those friends of mine,shit, they can
get a fucker going
smoked some too, paying for that
this snow covered morning
Lost count how many guys hit on me
but I remember what they said
and what they got told
young pups, every damn one of them
wanted to run with the big dogs
Laughed until I cried, pictures were
taken so we can flash back to our
craziness and we vowed we would get
together again soon
we always say that and than time slips
away from us,caught up in work,kids, life.
had whiskey and beer with my music
and those friends of mine,shit, they can
get a fucker going
smoked some too, paying for that
this snow covered morning
Lost count how many guys hit on me
but I remember what they said
and what they got told
young pups, every damn one of them
wanted to run with the big dogs
Laughed until I cried, pictures were
taken so we can flash back to our
craziness and we vowed we would get
together again soon
we always say that and than time slips
away from us,caught up in work,kids, life.
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Re: Night Out
Anonymous
18th Jan 2014 2:49pm
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18th Jan 2014 3:50pm
We say we'll get together more often but reality sets in...haha... :)
Thank you Gabriel :)
Thank you Gabriel :)
Re: Night Out
Anonymous
18th Jan 2014 3:16pm
nyclee dun poeitess! Rm
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18th Jan 2014 3:51pm
Re: Night Out
18th Jan 2014 5:48pm
nyce
but wouldn't '''then '''be better than ...''than'??
we always say that and than ....time slips
but wouldn't '''then '''be better than ...''than'??
we always say that and than ....time slips
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18th Jan 2014 9:40pm
Re: Night Out
18th Jan 2014 6:37pm
A fun girl's night out. It must feel nice to be hit on, right? I guess that depends on what's said :) Well done Tommie! I too like the reality check at the end.
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re: Re: Night Out
18th Jan 2014 9:46pm
It felt so good but smiling and shooting them down was great!My girlfriends are so bad but in such a great way!It was a much needed night out!Thank you GW! :)
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19th Jan 2014 2:43am
Re: Night Out
22nd Jan 2014 1:18am
Sweet piece i love how you breathe into this and brought it to life i can see the whole thing go down awesome
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22nd Jan 2014 1:28am