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Green Eyed Love

I stand here,  
with so many things I want to say
[I've been so silly, I think I care, compliments feel amazing, amongst other things that tie all this into poetry] 
but I don't know where to start
[I've been so jealous]   
so the letters fall like piss
[yellow and pointless, something with an everyday originality]   
and the commas and full stops like white powder from a druggies nose
[clouding every word so they sl-sl-slur...]   
and the pen drops like an empty bottle...
[and my eyes shut on these brilliant ideas that stay confined in my brain]   
I hope everyday damages you
the way you damage my words.
Written by ImperfectedStone (The Gardener)
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