Twenty-nine  - Senryu

Your writes can feel so soft to read with the msg like shards of glass. I so enjoy reading you Miss Chi. I thank you as always.

Yes, it's the shards that make us bleed and feel alive. Thanks for your insightful words, Twitch. I'm always looking forward to your thoughts on my poems since I value them much.

where better to air
your feelings..?

or not, of course...

enjoyed very much..:)

Glad you enjoyed it, Paul! I always appreciate your thoughtful comments! They mean a lot!

Well said, love your writings they're amazing

I can only return your lovely words, Sarah! Thank you so much for reading and giving me your welcome opinion!

You always say so much with so few words...

amazing pen...

JeJe ox

Thank you, JeJe! I love those short poems very much! Glad that you like them! xo

Outstanding! You have truly mastered this form
My dear n I know you're comfortable in it
But now, I'm praying to see you step outside of your comfort zone and feed us all an EPIC sensual trip becuz u def. Got enough passion in you to do it!

Thanks a lot for your praise :-), Poe! Yes, I am comfortable in the haiku form. I'm not sure I can master an epic poem since at least my longer ones lack consistency, at least in my eyes. But I promise to try one!

Goodgirl, I'm sure you'll do fine! :)

Whoa,you pack a punch there Miss Chi :)

Oh. I didn't intend to pack a punch, Hash! It's simply like that. Sometimes no hearts are involved in a horizontal dance ... The hurting of feelings was not intended and didn't take place!

As such it can be when pillows reveal their tales!

Thank you, Liz for your thoughtful comment! I made sure to get discreet pillows :-). They cost a bit more, but ...

Enjoyed this senryu!! Writting so fluid! Very nice, Miss Chi!

Thank you, Malin, for your kind words, I'll do my very best :-).

in fact, I just used a similar thought in a poem we haven't posted yet: people make love when they are in love. before that, it's just sex. (which, in itself, is a wonderful thing!)...

And why not? Love doesn't always has to be the motor for sex. Impatiently awaiting your new poem, John!

Thank you kindly, Gabriel, for your lovely comment and especially for the "Chi style" :-). I much appreciate your amiable input.xoxo

Effective Erotic Read

Hot

Thank you so much, PoetSpeak, for your kind words!

This gave me gooooooose bumps. Short and beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you so much, Ella.Neftali, for your comment which, in return, gave ME goose bumps!I'm so humbled by it!

Sounds like a one night stand turning into a second night on the same stained sheets.