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Doors
I wish you were the stranger
The one who I opened the door to,
me being all alone here,
just pushed your way past,
The sweet cookie jar
Caught me
Blush red
took my breath
stopping my voice mid senten. .
Your finger to my lips
shh.
the ones down there
The door open
walk right in why don't you
please
The one who I opened the door to,
me being all alone here,
just pushed your way past,
The sweet cookie jar
Caught me
Blush red
took my breath
stopping my voice mid senten. .
Your finger to my lips
shh.
the ones down there
The door open
walk right in why don't you
please
Published 17th Jan 2014
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17th Jan 2014 4:27pm
17th Jan 2014 4:35pm
I'm happy you liked this Rain
though i prefer people to comment because they
like my scribes
not feel compelled because I've commented on theirs
means little otherwise
rose
though i prefer people to comment because they
like my scribes
not feel compelled because I've commented on theirs
means little otherwise
rose
18th Jan 2014 1:22am
I wasn't compelled to response to this piece just because you visited me, Rose! Not sure why you felt the need to say it, because I truly liked the ink, but I'll delete my meaningless comment.....
17th Jan 2014 11:59pm
18th Jan 2014 00:11am
