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Silent Utterings < of sweet inspiration>
rarely am i at a loss for words
they seem to come in droves and herds
usually they stampede my brain
running wild, carefree, and untamed
i've always been told i think too much
and that my imagination can't be touched
it takes a lot to make my brain shut up
but he...see he..he left me dumbstruck
made my thoughts halt and give undivided attention
in a cloud of dust the stampede held in suspension
3yes searching, ears twitching, as i strain to listen
he gives me pause...then utter comprehension
it lingered in a whisper heard off in the distance
encrypted in the hush,slipping in and out of existence
it was thunderously deafening,blaring,and earth shaking
it stilled me completely, my heart skip palpitating
never has a whisper screamed so loud
as faint as a heartbeat roaring like a crowd
i felt it throbbing and pounding in my ear
warmth kissed my neck and i felt him near
like a hot hurricane it screamed my name
and i burst into a million flames
brighter than a hundred suns
warming the frigid air down in my lungs
he was a slow breath exhaled, a heated sigh
that crept down my body and parted my thighs
touching me.. knowingly..tracing my silhouette
molding me like supple clay, wet with sweat
his slippery finger fondling my intellect
sculpting daydreams,chiseling new dialect
the way he twist and shape the alphabet
made me wanna drown myself inside his chest
i was swimming in pools of thought
left drenched by his lyrical onslaught
since these thought inception
i've noticed the reflection
mirrors of his heart
creating breathtaking art
see the dreamweaver had shown me
truly nothing is wasted by infinity
cataclysmic epiphanies of endless possibilities
i tiptoed into his eyes and saw authenticity
to see me the way he sees me
stirred something in me so beautifully
every cell in my body started vibrating
tears came to my eyes as i started shaking
my lips began to tremble from the sensation
and i was pinging with sweet inspiration
***partly inspired by primetime- by Janelle Monae ft. Miguel
http://youtu.be/Oxls2xX0Clg
they seem to come in droves and herds
usually they stampede my brain
running wild, carefree, and untamed
i've always been told i think too much
and that my imagination can't be touched
it takes a lot to make my brain shut up
but he...see he..he left me dumbstruck
made my thoughts halt and give undivided attention
in a cloud of dust the stampede held in suspension
3yes searching, ears twitching, as i strain to listen
he gives me pause...then utter comprehension
it lingered in a whisper heard off in the distance
encrypted in the hush,slipping in and out of existence
it was thunderously deafening,blaring,and earth shaking
it stilled me completely, my heart skip palpitating
never has a whisper screamed so loud
as faint as a heartbeat roaring like a crowd
i felt it throbbing and pounding in my ear
warmth kissed my neck and i felt him near
like a hot hurricane it screamed my name
and i burst into a million flames
brighter than a hundred suns
warming the frigid air down in my lungs
he was a slow breath exhaled, a heated sigh
that crept down my body and parted my thighs
touching me.. knowingly..tracing my silhouette
molding me like supple clay, wet with sweat
his slippery finger fondling my intellect
sculpting daydreams,chiseling new dialect
the way he twist and shape the alphabet
made me wanna drown myself inside his chest
i was swimming in pools of thought
left drenched by his lyrical onslaught
since these thought inception
i've noticed the reflection
mirrors of his heart
creating breathtaking art
see the dreamweaver had shown me
truly nothing is wasted by infinity
cataclysmic epiphanies of endless possibilities
i tiptoed into his eyes and saw authenticity
to see me the way he sees me
stirred something in me so beautifully
every cell in my body started vibrating
tears came to my eyes as i started shaking
my lips began to tremble from the sensation
and i was pinging with sweet inspiration
***partly inspired by primetime- by Janelle Monae ft. Miguel
http://youtu.be/Oxls2xX0Clg
Published 17th Jan 2014
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17th Jan 2014 4:56am
And you speak of "Silent Utterings"? My goodness, i am almost rendered speechless by the intensity of this pen....
"...he was a slow breath exhaled, a heated sigh
that crept down my body and parted my thighs
touching me.. knowingly..tracing my silloutte
molding me like supple clay, wet with sweat
his slippery finger fondling my intelect
sculpting daydreams,chiseling new dialect
the way he twist and shape the alphabet
made me wanna drown myself inside his chest "
You've been reading too much of my ink!!! (just kidding)
This one gets an A++ : )
"...he was a slow breath exhaled, a heated sigh
that crept down my body and parted my thighs
touching me.. knowingly..tracing my silloutte
molding me like supple clay, wet with sweat
his slippery finger fondling my intelect
sculpting daydreams,chiseling new dialect
the way he twist and shape the alphabet
made me wanna drown myself inside his chest "
You've been reading too much of my ink!!! (just kidding)
This one gets an A++ : )
17th Jan 2014 5:02am
lol sometimes those are the best kinds...my humbled thanks Mr M always appreciate your kind feedback!!
Anonymous
17th Jan 2014 5:00am
Very sweet indeed...
17th Jan 2014 5:07am
17th Jan 2014 5:36am
Omg, you absolutely mesmerized me with this one my
Sweetness! Outstanding :)
Sweetness! Outstanding :)
17th Jan 2014 5:44am
so glad that you enjoyed poetik..thank you kindly for reading and for the lovely comment
17th Jan 2014 6:01am
17th Jan 2014 6:38am
25th Jan 2014 8:52am
cataclysmic epiphanies of endless possibilities
i tiptoed into his eyes and saw authenticity
to see me the way he sees me
stirred something in me so beautifully
every cell in my body started vibrating
tears came to my eyes as i started shaking
my lips began to tremble from the sensation
and i was pinging with sweet inspiration
This brought such a rush to drop my palms to the table. When I was little I always heard things between sounds. Clips of words at a time, sounded like me, but older. Felt as if I was watching over my own self. After enough years of meditating and accepting all possibility I realized our future and present and past selves are all one. We are all one, our egos are illusory. By seeing and appreciating another human, we highlight traits that otherwise would be as private and ephemeral as ego itself. So in giving love even in admiration we give value. If I notice a trait in a stranger that I highlight with praise and co-operative spirit and that trait is later reflected on by that person? Thus yields them cleaning out a whole wing of their spiritual palace.
I wander and ponder in amazement the countless chambers of your spiritual palace.
i tiptoed into his eyes and saw authenticity
to see me the way he sees me
stirred something in me so beautifully
every cell in my body started vibrating
tears came to my eyes as i started shaking
my lips began to tremble from the sensation
and i was pinging with sweet inspiration
This brought such a rush to drop my palms to the table. When I was little I always heard things between sounds. Clips of words at a time, sounded like me, but older. Felt as if I was watching over my own self. After enough years of meditating and accepting all possibility I realized our future and present and past selves are all one. We are all one, our egos are illusory. By seeing and appreciating another human, we highlight traits that otherwise would be as private and ephemeral as ego itself. So in giving love even in admiration we give value. If I notice a trait in a stranger that I highlight with praise and co-operative spirit and that trait is later reflected on by that person? Thus yields them cleaning out a whole wing of their spiritual palace.
I wander and ponder in amazement the countless chambers of your spiritual palace.
25th Jan 2014 8:20pm
Well now couldnt help but have a big ole skool aid smile after reading such a lovely and thoughtful comment.forever humbled by your kind words and beyond pleased that you enjoyed :) I could ramble on but will just let it rest at thank you!!
