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Fly Butterfly
Wow lovely lady
Charm is your name
So to spark the fellas
Even despite your fame
Dream of that lovely smile
In the middle of the night
Hope to feel you are willing
Take bodies to their heights
Those lovely curves
I would love to touch
So have to wonder
How you can be single and such
No harm in my fantasies
Of you calling for more
Last ounce of strength we have
Forget the knock on the door!
Charm is your name
So to spark the fellas
Even despite your fame
Dream of that lovely smile
In the middle of the night
Hope to feel you are willing
Take bodies to their heights
Those lovely curves
I would love to touch
So have to wonder
How you can be single and such
No harm in my fantasies
Of you calling for more
Last ounce of strength we have
Forget the knock on the door!
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Re: Fly Butterfly
16th Jan 2014 5:17pm
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16th Jan 2014 7:07pm
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16th Jan 2014 10:36pm
funny I don't recall Eric Clapton in the background when I penned this! (joke)
Re: Fly Butterfly
16th Jan 2014 7:45pm
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16th Jan 2014 10:37pm
thanks...this is actually something I wrote several months ago but for some reason never published.
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16th Jan 2014 10:57pm
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17th Jan 2014 3:15am
maybe but when it comes to composition I tend be more in the John Lennon (implusive) "school" then the Paul McCartney (intricate production) approach, which is why this one reflects the exception rather then the norm :)
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17th Jan 2014 1:43am
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Re: Fly Butterfly
21st Jan 2014 5:28am
the poem is categorised in upbeat but it felt like a very sensual write to me .. very sweet and modestly expressing ur feelings .. my sir it was a delight ..
keep Rollin
cyanide..
keep Rollin
cyanide..
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21st Jan 2014 8:58am
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