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The Meeting
He stood before me for the first time
I could feel myself unravelling with want
his shirt loose and unbuttoned but
not all the way
jeans that fit so snuggly
I wanted to reach out and touch him so badly
but I needed to take him all in
breathe him in with my eyes
he was so much more
beautiful in person than I expected
his smooth skin a deep golden brown
his dark hair wavy against his brow
his eyes a much deeper golden brown
I wanted to find myself drowning in
his nose sharp and straight
his lips just the right amount of fullness
that made you want to bite into them
ripe as an apple
his neck smooth and utterly delectable
I was dying for a taste....
my eyes following that button line
I could hold myself back no longer
and he was waiting so patiently for me
to make the first move...
I could feel myself unravelling with want
his shirt loose and unbuttoned but
not all the way
jeans that fit so snuggly
I wanted to reach out and touch him so badly
but I needed to take him all in
breathe him in with my eyes
he was so much more
beautiful in person than I expected
his smooth skin a deep golden brown
his dark hair wavy against his brow
his eyes a much deeper golden brown
I wanted to find myself drowning in
his nose sharp and straight
his lips just the right amount of fullness
that made you want to bite into them
ripe as an apple
his neck smooth and utterly delectable
I was dying for a taste....
my eyes following that button line
I could hold myself back no longer
and he was waiting so patiently for me
to make the first move...
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Re: The Meeting
beautiful in person than I expected
his smooth skin a deep golden brown
his dark hair wavy against his brow
his eyes a much deeper golden brown
lovely words urs
his smooth skin a deep golden brown
his dark hair wavy against his brow
his eyes a much deeper golden brown
lovely words urs
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15th Jan 2014 00:54am
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re: Re: The Meeting
15th Jan 2014 00:48am
Re: The Meeting
14th Jan 2014 10:07pm
What a beautiful and sensual meeting this was! :) I just love sampling your erotica. You don't write much in this genre and that's refreshing to me.
Love this Jemac...Xo
Love this Jemac...Xo
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re: Re: The Meeting
15th Jan 2014 00:50am
Thank you so much Rain!! Yes, I prefer to enshroud myself in a bit of mystery...just giving little tastes!! Thank you so much dear heart for your lovely comments... :)
Re: The Meeting
15th Jan 2014 3:52am
So nice and well strung together, conveys imagery and solidity at the same time, beautifully written.
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Re: The Meeting
15th Jan 2014 10:35am
That's so sexy, JeJe! You depicted so beautifully the sensuous and nearly unbearable moment before the dance of love begins. Amazing!
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15th Jan 2014 2:18pm
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