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The Tipping Point of No (Atakti and runningturtle87)
Balance tipped towards the inscrutable,
the flame of vigilance burns brighter
than we know. Though we still dwell
in the shadows, there is a universal cry
for order in the chaos.
Shutting down in silent vows, scars
weave into beauty marks in our struggle
to refrain from inflicting the same marks
on others. It is a rare steel core that lends
strength, to step into the light.
the flame of vigilance burns brighter
than we know. Though we still dwell
in the shadows, there is a universal cry
for order in the chaos.
Shutting down in silent vows, scars
weave into beauty marks in our struggle
to refrain from inflicting the same marks
on others. It is a rare steel core that lends
strength, to step into the light.
Published 12th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
13th Jan 2014 3:29am
It's a hard lesson to learn ... but for sanity, one we must...
Great collab, you two..
Great collab, you two..
13th Jan 2014 2:32pm
13th Jan 2014 1:02pm
Wise words from the Turtle... all I did was pay attention and put them down all tidy.
:)
:)
13th Jan 2014 2:33pm
And create the circumstance of the discussion that led to the writing, so no big deal...just inspiration.
