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Idiot
Sitting by you I must refrain
From violently disfiguring you.
From shoving a knife in your brain.
Sometimes it's really hard,
With the urges I get,
Not to do something I may or may not regret.
Pulling me in is your stupidity.
Goodness, you're a fucking idiot!
You're just like everyone else
It's a damned pity!
From violently disfiguring you.
From shoving a knife in your brain.
Sometimes it's really hard,
With the urges I get,
Not to do something I may or may not regret.
Pulling me in is your stupidity.
Goodness, you're a fucking idiot!
You're just like everyone else
It's a damned pity!
Published 9th Jan 2014
| Edited 8th Feb 2014
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2014 3:43am
Well written.
9th Jan 2014 5:08am
9th Jan 2014 5:59pm
9th Jan 2014 10:37pm
10th Jan 2014 1:14am
God the last line in the first stanza
Gave me a chill! very dark ink u spilled
Gave me a chill! very dark ink u spilled
10th Jan 2014 1:17am
Haha- glad I got a reaction. This is just spur of the moment impulse. Thanks for reading, hun.
22nd Jan 2014 3:33am
Pulling me in is your stupidity.
Goodness, you're a fucking idiot!
These were super lines
Cap't Ron
If you would like to talk my e-male address has been put at the end of my profile. I could use some help on the toy issue. You have a refreshing writing style. Maybe we could collaborate on an adult toy poem. I have All the experience and ALL the stuff but boy rhyming is really tough.
Goodness, you're a fucking idiot!
These were super lines
Cap't Ron
If you would like to talk my e-male address has been put at the end of my profile. I could use some help on the toy issue. You have a refreshing writing style. Maybe we could collaborate on an adult toy poem. I have All the experience and ALL the stuff but boy rhyming is really tough.
22nd Jan 2014 6:09pm
26th Jan 2014 4:07pm
raw , straight forward and right on target ...u didn't mess around much , just went like 'imma kill u' .. that was a tight piece ..
perfect use punctuations and a very interesting rhyme scheme ... abbot u seemed to be blasting off the fellows head lol...
keep Rollin
cyanide..
perfect use punctuations and a very interesting rhyme scheme ... abbot u seemed to be blasting off the fellows head lol...
keep Rollin
cyanide..
26th Jan 2014 5:04pm
Oh no, no blasting this person's head off. It'd be all manual labor. Thanks so much for reading!
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11th Apr 2014 6:13pm
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