Sin

Tommie love, I'm sure hoping you won't be upset when you read that I burst out laughing with the final 5 words..hehe surely not what I expected ;)
Love this! xo
~Tom

Of course not Tom...lmao...I'm just happy people read me.
If we can't laugh we might as well be dead.Thanks Tom :)

And the men will look with wild wonder
thinking
about how she will sin
and how soon
she'll begin

and who will her sin win
one
has already stood in line
to begin

Thanks for reading A :)

glad 4 u
at least u read and thank

Butter rum, oil, secret place tht bejewel her sin mmm this is sweet i love this short but intoxicating piece beautiful write

Butter rum warmed...yummy...thanks for reading BS.

Damn Tommie! Great write sweetheart, this reminded me of a hot wax show I saw in my younger years. Lol… Again nice read, enjoyed it.

Hot wax show..interesting! I'm glad you liked this little piece, thank you DrLove.

I don't know if you've heard of the rhyming slang used by certain Londoners in England, (where words or phrases are used as euphemisms for words of fewer syllables - eg Apples and pears=chairs) but it occurred to me your pen-name could be a Cockney rhyme for 'sin'.  (Eg -'They're not married, their living in Tommielynn.')

Never thought of that SS...thank you for your words. :)

great write Tommie mmm butter rum

Thank you glen

mynd candee  rM

Thanks for reading rm.

damn, Tommie, I'm in the circle w/those other guys watching you smooth the oil on, very entertaining...

Glad you liked it John, thank you.