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Haiku eyes

Look deep in the eyes
The perfect marvellous light
See the real love

Written by Gabyyy

(GabiGabriella)

Published 7th Jan 2014

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Re: Haiku eyes

7th Jan 2014 11:52am

u r as usual sensitive when write

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Re: Haiku eyes

7th Jan 2014 12:44pm

Beautiful Haiku, Gabi, I love it so much!

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Re: Haiku eyes

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7th Jan 2014 4:22pm

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Re: Haiku eyes

7th Jan 2014 10:23pm

Thank you for comments guys,i am so glad you like this haiku:)

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- Edited 11th May 2018 11:47am

8th Jan 2014 3:43am

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