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First Things First
One more hit
that last inhale
one last taste,one last bite
rushing to my head
no more worries,let me forget
only me here,no one else.
One last touch
I'll be fine,one last time
spinning me round,making me dizzy
gotta sit down.
But first I need to lift myself,
off the ground.
that last inhale
one last taste,one last bite
rushing to my head
no more worries,let me forget
only me here,no one else.
One last touch
I'll be fine,one last time
spinning me round,making me dizzy
gotta sit down.
But first I need to lift myself,
off the ground.
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7th Jan 2014 1:56am
How quite unexpectedly those 'certain' insidious side-effects catch one off-guard! :) (GOL!)
Errr....ummmm...really powerful 'substance' in this write!
(could you use a hand, my friend? :p
Errr....ummmm...really powerful 'substance' in this write!
(could you use a hand, my friend? :p
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Anonymous
- Edited 17th Jan 2014 3:03pm
7th Jan 2014 4:46am
Oh boy! I felt this poem a lot. I use to think everything you wrote when taking a hit. Very powerful and eloquent. <3
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2014 9:04pm
keep getting up Bro..if at first you falter..keep swinging.
Sweet ink Hashman!
~Tom
Sweet ink Hashman!
~Tom
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11th Jan 2014 2:59am
There's a lot of stability laying on the floor. It can be worth staying a while. Thank you Mr H.
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