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dear brother
unless you have been in this situation yourself
i don't recommend judging me and taking the piss!
this is something you don't understand boy
and if you continue to torture me so i shall make you understand my pain!
you should know that some of these scars are caused by you
spread rumours of me being emo haha i suggest you think twice about that!
one day i will get my revenge you twisted boy and i shall become the twisted
i shall relish at the thought of putting you in my lifes hardship!
hehe first i shall get you alone one dark night and you will awake to me
you will scream your last breath and no one will hear you!
you will bleed to death like i nearly did
and you will die like i failed!
this is your end and i shall enjoy it
i won't miss you if your existance was to suddenly dissappear!
i don't recommend judging me and taking the piss!
this is something you don't understand boy
and if you continue to torture me so i shall make you understand my pain!
you should know that some of these scars are caused by you
spread rumours of me being emo haha i suggest you think twice about that!
one day i will get my revenge you twisted boy and i shall become the twisted
i shall relish at the thought of putting you in my lifes hardship!
hehe first i shall get you alone one dark night and you will awake to me
you will scream your last breath and no one will hear you!
you will bleed to death like i nearly did
and you will die like i failed!
this is your end and i shall enjoy it
i won't miss you if your existance was to suddenly dissappear!
Published 11th Feb 2011
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12th Feb 2011 8:23pm
a very bitter and heartwrethced poem,
i can feel your pain red raw pounidng in my heart annd touching a vein.
i love the meaning behind the poem. its real, truthful and brutally honest.
Where self harm is involved i can completely relate with the whole 'emo' thing.. it was the same with my family especially my sister and at times it would be so hard to even listen to what they were teasing you about that you'd either want to take two actions. 1.harm yourself again, or two harm those who are harming you with their words which is a very personal and scary experience to go through..
rumours are just that. rumours... and although it is very very painful to have them spread you have to look deep inside your heart and realise... that it doesnt matter what anyone thinks coz ultimately its your struggle not theirs and if they want to bully you or harass you over it then thats just them being pathetic...
coz its obvious that either... they haven't had struggles yet and soon their going to be in for a big fucking suprise... or two they have had struggles and are insercure.
the term 'emo' in my opinion is pathetic... because people think everyone who is seriously depressed and ends up inflicting pain on themselves is emo instead of fucking normal considering the amount of pain they recieve in todays circumstances and trust me i know how it feels to not be understood.
its a struggle many people struggle with and should be accepted and dealt with in a proper manner instead of being pushed aside along with a stupid term.
hang in their chikadee.. im feeling the pain.ALOT. x
i can feel your pain red raw pounidng in my heart annd touching a vein.
i love the meaning behind the poem. its real, truthful and brutally honest.
Where self harm is involved i can completely relate with the whole 'emo' thing.. it was the same with my family especially my sister and at times it would be so hard to even listen to what they were teasing you about that you'd either want to take two actions. 1.harm yourself again, or two harm those who are harming you with their words which is a very personal and scary experience to go through..
rumours are just that. rumours... and although it is very very painful to have them spread you have to look deep inside your heart and realise... that it doesnt matter what anyone thinks coz ultimately its your struggle not theirs and if they want to bully you or harass you over it then thats just them being pathetic...
coz its obvious that either... they haven't had struggles yet and soon their going to be in for a big fucking suprise... or two they have had struggles and are insercure.
the term 'emo' in my opinion is pathetic... because people think everyone who is seriously depressed and ends up inflicting pain on themselves is emo instead of fucking normal considering the amount of pain they recieve in todays circumstances and trust me i know how it feels to not be understood.
its a struggle many people struggle with and should be accepted and dealt with in a proper manner instead of being pushed aside along with a stupid term.
hang in their chikadee.. im feeling the pain.ALOT. x
12th Feb 2011 8:32pm
ouch i dig the harshnessss
,,,,i had a flashbackk of something personally with this one.....greatttttt
,,,,i had a flashbackk of something personally with this one.....greatttttt
13th Feb 2011 11:42am
@riyah, thank you and yes i understand what you mean. i hope you'll be ok too. i'll be fine just need to keep venting myself through poetry instead of the other way. x
@lazyboyfromny, thank you haha x
@lazyboyfromny, thank you haha x
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14th Jun 2011 8:02pm
oh didums :) unless you actually understand the anger in this twisted poem i suggest your comment shouldn't exist hahaha be more open minded :)
27th Aug 2011 7:55am
