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You're The One
Out of everyone
I have ever known
I miss you the most
if I could bring back someone
it surely would be you
I would meet you at the gate
not a second late
with a bear hug so big
and smiles so wide,
who would be the first to let go?
I have ever known
I miss you the most
if I could bring back someone
it surely would be you
I would meet you at the gate
not a second late
with a bear hug so big
and smiles so wide,
who would be the first to let go?
Published 4th Jan 2014
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4th Jan 2014 10:03pm
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4th Jan 2014 10:26pm
From the passionate write I bet noone of you'd ever let go! You must be in love. Are you in love? At least this piece indicates that. Lovely!
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2014 1:18am
With that person ... you never let go...
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8th Jan 2014 4:17am
Hashman - It takes the poet to capture the secret longing of one human heart enraptured by another human heart. Even in memory, it's a hug that will never let go. Most enjoyed this Hashman. Namyh
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