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Explosive
Tell me I'm your habit,
the one that you can't
break
I'll tell you you're a
God gazing into your
eyes
Tell me I'm your miracle
intertwined with your
soul
I'll tell you you're a
beast while you take
control
Tell me I'm your wicked
fuck than fuck me real
hard
I'll tell you you're a gorgeous
thrill caught up in my own
madness
the one that you can't
break
I'll tell you you're a
God gazing into your
eyes
Tell me I'm your miracle
intertwined with your
soul
I'll tell you you're a
beast while you take
control
Tell me I'm your wicked
fuck than fuck me real
hard
I'll tell you you're a gorgeous
thrill caught up in my own
madness
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Re: Explosive
3rd Jan 2014 8:17pm
Re: Explosive
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2014 9:54pm
youse wrote dat for majurr impactk rM
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4th Jan 2014 6:19am
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3rd Jan 2014 10:14pm
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4th Jan 2014 6:20am
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2014 10:48pm
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re: Re: Explosive
4th Jan 2014 6:21am
Re: Explosive
4th Jan 2014 3:33am
WOW Tommie Lynn wht deep passion this is and I love the 5 and 6 stanza tht really open up this beautiful piece ****
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re: Re: Explosive
4th Jan 2014 6:22am
Re: Explosive
4th Jan 2014 10:15am
twas a lil short , but explosions are just that , short lived yet leaving u wanting more ....
great job!
great job!
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4th Jan 2014 1:33pm
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4th Jan 2014 1:58pm
Re: Explosive
4th Jan 2014 2:40pm
You know how to get a guys attention babe. And that's exactly what you've got. Holy s**t you got it. Sexy ink woman. XO
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re: Re: Explosive
5th Jan 2014 11:56pm
Re: Explosive
5th Jan 2014 00:55am
how did i miss it
if i tell u my style
will u guage my
appetite
why its standing all the while?
if i tell u my style
will u guage my
appetite
why its standing all the while?
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re: Re: Explosive
5th Jan 2014 11:56pm