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Love Wings
He came to her on butterfly wings
Carrying thoughts of love
This could be the change they need
She would sleep within him
Hiding inside his beauty
They fit and survive
And awake a new
Carrying thoughts of love
This could be the change they need
She would sleep within him
Hiding inside his beauty
They fit and survive
And awake a new
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3rd Jan 2014 1:54pm
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3rd Jan 2014 2:04pm
Gabriel you are the prince of great comments!Thank you my friend for your kind words.It means a lot. :)
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2014 1:59pm
sweet lil wryte poietess rM
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3rd Jan 2014 5:18pm
Beautiful, Tommie. I love the picture. Makes you want to crawl back into that cocoon together :)
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16th Jan 2014 10:43pm
just sharing please you may ignore
Dopardon the liberty so taken
my computer dictates…avoid all first letters as caps, as it is a compy’s requirement, not poetry’s
He came to her on butterfly wings
carrying thoughts of love,
this could be the change they need
she would sleep within him
hiding inside his beauty
they fit and survive
and
awake a new
Dopardon the liberty so taken
my computer dictates…avoid all first letters as caps, as it is a compy’s requirement, not poetry’s
He came to her on butterfly wings
carrying thoughts of love,
this could be the change they need
she would sleep within him
hiding inside his beauty
they fit and survive
and
awake a new
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16th Jan 2014 10:53pm
sorry I did mean no offense
to bear such a loss
I will delete it
if u say so
my deepest regrets
to bear such a loss
I will delete it
if u say so
my deepest regrets
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11th May 2014 10:56pm
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