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They Dance
She sways along to his guitar
He speaks her language
She kisses every one of his fingers
He watches as her lips leave each one
She translates his music into dance
His beautiful fingers playing for her
Her curves caught in the corners of his eyes
His cords become one with her movement
Her creation becomes love
He drifts within reach touching her purity
She wanders closer touching his expression
They dance to their own music
He speaks her language
She kisses every one of his fingers
He watches as her lips leave each one
She translates his music into dance
His beautiful fingers playing for her
Her curves caught in the corners of his eyes
His cords become one with her movement
Her creation becomes love
He drifts within reach touching her purity
She wanders closer touching his expression
They dance to their own music
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Re: They Dance
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2014 10:39pm
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Re: They Dance
2nd Jan 2014 10:43pm
ur music
made me dance
a soliloquy
mesmerized
that's perhaps only me
I like your poetry
made me dance
a soliloquy
mesmerized
that's perhaps only me
I like your poetry
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3rd Jan 2014 00:05am
Re: They Dance
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2014 10:54pm
Music is a beautiful language, I like the "translation" from music to dance, as if they are united as one though they are doing different things. Perfectly connected in unison, beautiful!
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3rd Jan 2014 00:06am
Re: They Dance
3rd Jan 2014 00:37am
Captures well the rhythm of romance. Dancing music and dance are two of my favorite pressure releases thanks for including them both :)
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3rd Jan 2014 3:10am
Re: They Dance
3rd Jan 2014 1:25am
love the structure of these lines -as'he' flows to 'she' and back again.Tightly held and let go -one to keep and read again - thanks Tommie
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re: Re: They Dance
3rd Jan 2014 3:13am
I appreciate you noticing that Whale, thanks for adding it to your RL and thank you for your kind words. :)
Re: They Dance
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2014 1:50am
damn poeitess...da's sum sweeeet dancin' poeitree! nyce rM
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