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Feast
She wants him, his flesh on hers.
His touch, be it gentle or rough.
He wants her, her lips leaving her moist mark on him.
Her glistening kiss, he wears like a tattoo.
He wants her, like he's starving and she's dinner.
She'll be his feast, feeding him until he's finished her.
He'll hold her, in his tenderheart.
She'll lay silently, upon his nakedness.
He will inhale her sweet scented hair, breathing in her warmth.
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Re: Feast
2nd Jan 2014 7:32am
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2nd Jan 2014 7:57am
God yeah! You make me hungry lady. Your bloody awesome Tommie Lynn. Thank you for that doll. XO
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2nd Jan 2014 8:07am
You look like supper and I'm that hungry mother fucker!
Heard it in a song. LMAO.
Mmmmm Mmmmm.!Would you like seconds?I had a sexy beast for inspiration! Thank YOU TS. XO
Heard it in a song. LMAO.
Mmmmm Mmmmm.!Would you like seconds?I had a sexy beast for inspiration! Thank YOU TS. XO
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2nd Jan 2014 2:45pm
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Anonymous
2nd Jan 2014 3:38pm
dat's betta den thanksgivin' turkey yumzey wumzey rM
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2nd Jan 2014 3:50pm
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2nd Jan 2014 3:51pm
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Anonymous
2nd Jan 2014 5:18pm
Hot damn, Tommie, I'm hungry now! A true feats for the senses indeed, and one that satistfies. My favorite line: "He wants her, her lips leaving her moist mark on him." Now, which set of lips I wonder? ;) What a very hot visual, so full of passion! I also like "Her glistening kiss, he wears like a tattoo." It's as if he wears her essence with pride, such an intimate thing. That one reasonated with me. You rule T!
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2nd Jan 2014 6:07pm
Thank you M, I'm glad you enjoyed this!It's a passionate piece very dear to me.As for the lips...both,of course!I think a man should wear a woman's essence with pride!And than kiss her, long and slow, wet and open...right on the mouth! ;)
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Anonymous
2nd Jan 2014 6:13pm
I agree. In fact, recently I enjoyed my woman's lips right before we had a bunch of friends over for dinner. I wonder if anyone caught the scent on my mouth..love it!
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2nd Jan 2014 6:23pm
Re: Feast
2nd Jan 2014 5:50pm
She'll be his feast,
feeding him until
he's finished her.
all guys love to eat ....it.....
as much as all gals love
to be eaten
that !
feeding him until
he's finished her.
all guys love to eat ....it.....
as much as all gals love
to be eaten
that !
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2nd Jan 2014 6:08pm
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2nd Jan 2014 7:33pm
hope ur well eaten
not bitten
tc
friend
hope u get another one
who will not be mistaken
will be in love to be also eaten
not bitten
tc
friend
hope u get another one
who will not be mistaken
will be in love to be also eaten
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Re: Feast
2nd Jan 2014 7:13pm
Very well written.
I especially like "her lips leaving her moist mark on him." Just beautiful.
I especially like "her lips leaving her moist mark on him." Just beautiful.
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2nd Jan 2014 8:08pm
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