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Frightened Eyes Opened Wide
In the deafening silence
Two hearts beat in sync.
Shallow breaths and roaming hands.
Is this the only way I can feel complete?
Numb to what I should be feeling.
Frightened eyes opened wide,
As unpleasant hands clench my thighs.
Hot breath on my lower half
Causes my skin to be condensated with shame.
Writhing and squirming,
I want to feel complete.
Please stop torturing me.
Two hearts beat in sync.
Shallow breaths and roaming hands.
Is this the only way I can feel complete?
Numb to what I should be feeling.
Frightened eyes opened wide,
As unpleasant hands clench my thighs.
Hot breath on my lower half
Causes my skin to be condensated with shame.
Writhing and squirming,
I want to feel complete.
Please stop torturing me.
Published 1st Jan 2014
| Edited 4th Jan 2014
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2nd Jan 2014 00:26am
It would be nice if you could extend it with a happy ending...preferably one that has a basis in reality. Otherwise, it seems to say plenty as it is.
2nd Jan 2014 00:48am
2nd Jan 2014 8:09am
this is almost how losing your virginity feels. you want it, but youre kinda afraid at the same time.
5th Jan 2014 9:43am
I agree with mister kitteh.
The poem still feels a little contradictory.
But what he said might explain it.
The poem still feels a little contradictory.
But what he said might explain it.
10th Feb 2014 4:33am
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25th Feb 2014 1:59am
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