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Together We Are, From So Far Away
I breathe into you from so far away,
my calmness enters you.
Can you feel me?I'm right there.
I'm touching you now, can you feel
my smile?I inhale you, taking in your
storm.Relieving you of mayhem. I
can feel you.You're touching me,
I can feel your love.You relieve my
suffering. Together we are, from
so far away.
my calmness enters you.
Can you feel me?I'm right there.
I'm touching you now, can you feel
my smile?I inhale you, taking in your
storm.Relieving you of mayhem. I
can feel you.You're touching me,
I can feel your love.You relieve my
suffering. Together we are, from
so far away.
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Re: Together We Are, From So Far Away
31st Dec 2013 5:32pm
the breeze
its like the breeze
far into the maddening hollowness
we all feel we are one
in sheer imagination
till we are in each other
and
finally done
your poetry is well written
A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR HAS BEGUN FOR ALLL
its like the breeze
far into the maddening hollowness
we all feel we are one
in sheer imagination
till we are in each other
and
finally done
your poetry is well written
A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR HAS BEGUN FOR ALLL
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re: Re: Together We Are, From So Far Away
31st Dec 2013 5:49pm
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31st Dec 2013 5:52pm
my ink of imagination flows
all over the world
the whole wide world does know
now u too do
and thank u friend
A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR AND SUCCESS TO YOU
in all what you want to
all over the world
the whole wide world does know
now u too do
and thank u friend
A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR AND SUCCESS TO YOU
in all what you want to
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31st Dec 2013 5:40pm
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Re: Together We Are, From So Far Away
Anonymous
31st Dec 2013 6:31pm
dat's lyke a warm brieze!!!! rM
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31st Dec 2013 7:07pm
Re: Together We Are, From So Far Away
31st Dec 2013 7:59pm
Tender promise of calm. I could use some of that :) Wonderful write, Tommie!
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