Tranquil alarms

I don't take drugs
but if I did it would be in a tranquil garden
actually has a slight catchy beat to this poem
bit musical even, but choose drug icon xD

This is so good ... Just what I needed to wake up to.  As crazy it may seem I even read it backwards skipping the line "Tranquil garden arms" to see if the imagery still worked, and that's what a garden is ... A seamless escape with no beginning nor end ... marvelous ink.

Thank you LSP xD
yes it seems to work backwards too
thankfully no messages from the devil
i looked just to be sure. .
:)

I like the juxtaposition of "tranquil" & "alarm". You know, a garden is a great example of this contradiction/dichotomy...because the garden dies only to be reborn. Its own death & decay is what gives it life. The right amount of manure & compost can eventually translate to healthy, delicious meals.

Your garden inspires a peculiar spirit. I am imagine hot days buzzing in the garden when reading this. A few "mood enhancers" are most welcome on those days toiling in the field, you know. With cold beer after. I'm keepin' it simple these days.

(I, of course, refer to marijuana. I would never recommend the harder drugs...they aren't conducive to garden work. AT ALL.)

Thanks for the toke, Rose :)

Thank you Scraps xD
amazing comments
:)

Intriguing piece filled with hundreds of potential back stories. Well done!

Thank you Gahd xD

This was a read I was forced to ponder a bit, as you present words that on the surface seem to be opposites. On full display is the evidence of a great poet.

On suggestion--- it may read better if in "from the dreaming of you when you wasn't here",  the "wasn't" is replaced with "weren't".

Thank you Jazz xD
beautiful commenting
Yes weren't or wasn't
works both ways
for me i preferred wasn't for this piece
xD

Rose, i like this new style the repetition of alternate lines as it breaks, it makes us pause and think with each new line escalating the story.
Very well done!

Thank you Vee xD
it was going to be lyrical
and maybe it still is lol
I've sung it and works for me :)

Lovely garden,I dig it :)

random garden xD
just looked tranquil

Tranquil surface ... hidden alarms... loving this garden.

Thank you petit xD