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If she only knew: revisisted

I am a horrible man,
but I spend time
on here
and look at the title:
Deep Underground poetry;
the harder side of poetry.
Then I read a poem
entitles 'if she only knew'
and I sincerely worry.
You may have seen it too,
and I feel for you,
so like any caring poet
I watched it four times,
analysed it and posted
my most honest critrique.
What you have just read,
which is what you're reading
NOW
is a sorry waste of effort,
just watch the video
and realise that humour
best resides
in spite.
If
she
only
knew!
Written by CruelHandedWriter (Jamie Rhodes)
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