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Sparrow Chimes
A song sung by sparrows
as they gather in the dead
branches
Frozen winter paradise
upon nature as sunlight
deceives
Cold invades everything
the tiny birds song turns
silent
Little skeletal bones are
left in the branches as
chimes
When the cold wind blows
the bones whistle a winter
song
as they gather in the dead
branches
Frozen winter paradise
upon nature as sunlight
deceives
Cold invades everything
the tiny birds song turns
silent
Little skeletal bones are
left in the branches as
chimes
When the cold wind blows
the bones whistle a winter
song
Published 30th Dec 2013
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Anonymous
30th Dec 2013 3:18pm
chillin' youse a sweeeeet tune wit dis won poitess! rM
30th Dec 2013 3:33pm
I just realized I don't hear the little birds out my window anymore. Just the rustle of the bare branches. Thanks for reading rM.
30th Dec 2013 5:16pm
I love this piece. Your connection with nature is comforting. One of my favorite sounds in that of wind chimes...the ones described here might be a little macabre for my hearing :)
30th Dec 2013 5:37pm
30th Dec 2013 5:39pm
30th Dec 2013 6:28pm
Your chimes lovely
Your words full of calm poise and grace
Your connectedness to nature apparent
Pen on my friend
Your words full of calm poise and grace
Your connectedness to nature apparent
Pen on my friend
30th Dec 2013 7:16pm
31st Dec 2013 4:34am
I love that you noticed the singing was gone babe. Most would not have. Touching write Angel. Thank you. xo
31st Dec 2013 4:45am
Even a bird's song is missed TS ,thank you for reading and commenting love. XO
31st Dec 2013 6:48am
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