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Punching Bag
Abused by a vile tongue
Turning my pure heart into hatred
He had a way of making my ears bleed
He washed me in possession
Every breath I took I had to ask for
I wasn't love, I never was
For him I was a nice ass
A great set of tits
A pretty mouth
That pussy he needed to control
I wasn't seen, I wasn't there
It was all lies, all the time
I could taste everything I couldn't have
He was always in his own way, riding the fence on love and hate
He pulled me into his sinking pit
Used me as his verbal punching bag
He was going down but he'll be God damned if he's going alone
Turning my pure heart into hatred
He had a way of making my ears bleed
He washed me in possession
Every breath I took I had to ask for
I wasn't love, I never was
For him I was a nice ass
A great set of tits
A pretty mouth
That pussy he needed to control
I wasn't seen, I wasn't there
It was all lies, all the time
I could taste everything I couldn't have
He was always in his own way, riding the fence on love and hate
He pulled me into his sinking pit
Used me as his verbal punching bag
He was going down but he'll be God damned if he's going alone
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Re: Punching Bag
29th Dec 2013 2:35am
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29th Dec 2013 3:16am
Re: Punching Bag
29th Dec 2013 2:53am
Painful to read Tommie. Very. And creates an anger in me. There's no hell waiting for you girl. He can ride his wave alone. XO
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re: Re: Punching Bag
29th Dec 2013 3:32am
I'm not going down without a fight!You can bet my pretty little ass on that. ;)
I appreciate you reading me TS, I always value your comments. XO
I appreciate you reading me TS, I always value your comments. XO
Re: Punching Bag
29th Dec 2013 3:27am
I love this painful truth of ur soul but i'd rather he burn alone. Istead of going down in flames with him
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re: Re: Punching Bag
29th Dec 2013 3:36am
This isn't the end, unfortunately there will be more.
Thank you BlackSoul, for your words. :)
Thank you BlackSoul, for your words. :)
Re: Punching Bag
29th Dec 2013 3:41am
Seems like he managed to make it hell on earth for you. Time to look toward heaven and escape the gravitational pull of his abuse. This is a well written piece, Tommie :)
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29th Dec 2013 3:58am
Re: Punching Bag
29th Dec 2013 3:35pm
Like (stylistically) the portrayal of physical and other abuse that the title readily suggests.
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29th Dec 2013 3:54pm
Re: Punching Bag
30th Dec 2013 4:26am
Absolutely love this. Not the anger itself but the way you expressed it. As for whoever this is about... Kick his ass :)
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re: Re: Punching Bag
30th Dec 2013 4:40am
Hehe...I just chuckled, thanks for that KittyFromHell, I've grown, kicking his ass is a waste of my precious time,I have imagined myself ripping his heart from his chest and shoving it down his throat but that's it.I thank you so much for reading and commenting. :)
re: re: Re: Punching Bag
1st Jan 2014 11:28pm
"ripping his heart out and shoving it done his throat" well certainly sounds brutal. a physical pain is such a beautiful thing just like your poem I love this poem, almost as much as pain(I am a masochist) Great work I like it a lot.
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1st Jan 2014 11:39pm