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Ich Liebe Dich
Every night she would whisper
Ich Liebe Dich
with a soft hug and a kiss
I'll never forget the sound of her voice
Ich Liebe Dich
or the softness of her touch
Ich Liebe Dich
with a soft hug and a kiss
I'll never forget the sound of her voice
Ich Liebe Dich
or the softness of her touch
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Re: Ich Liebe Dich
28th Dec 2013 5:59pm
Nothing like hearing "I love you" in a foreign language. Good piece for how short it is!
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28th Dec 2013 7:45pm
Re: Ich Liebe Dich
28th Dec 2013 6:11pm
It's such fond memories that center us. Was this a grandma? Their is nothing more secure and heartwarming than unconditional love.
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re: Re: Ich Liebe Dich
28th Dec 2013 7:47pm
Yes, my Grandmother.She always had a way of making each of us feel special!I say this to my kids and grandkids.Thank you for your words GW :)
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28th Dec 2013 8:56pm
Re: Ich Liebe Dich
28th Dec 2013 7:33pm
Echo GW, with the same question.
It could have been the words of the soldier in the barrack square after an assignation with Lili Marlene (in the WWII song).
It could have been the words of the soldier in the barrack square after an assignation with Lili Marlene (in the WWII song).
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re: Re: Ich Liebe Dich
28th Dec 2013 7:49pm
My Grandmother, an extremely strong woman!Thank you SS, I appreciate you reading!
Re: Ich Liebe Dich
Anonymous
28th Dec 2013 7:52pm
How sweet poitess!!!! At first glantz, I thought 'dat meant sumthin else! Unkle Willi used to tell Aunt Renate, "Ich liebe Katzen, Ich liebe Katzen!"
rM :D
rM :D
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28th Dec 2013 10:17pm
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re: Re: Ich Liebe Dich
29th Dec 2013 00:00am
Re: Ich Liebe Dich
29th Dec 2013 00:27am
you seemingly are
too sophisticated to be here
in the underground world
sensitive in spirit as in love
but you never comment
on any poem of mine lady
so i shan't comment no more
too sophisticated to be here
in the underground world
sensitive in spirit as in love
but you never comment
on any poem of mine lady
so i shan't comment no more
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re: Re: Ich Liebe Dich
29th Dec 2013 00:41am
A lot of people read you but don't comment.Am I the only one you wrote this to or did you tell all the people that never comment on your writes?
If you say I'm too sophisticated to be here
than it must be true!Sensitive sure, but I'm not complaining because people don't comment on my writes.I would be happy with people reading them if it were me.And if you don't want to comment anymore than don't. Thank you A.
If you say I'm too sophisticated to be here
than it must be true!Sensitive sure, but I'm not complaining because people don't comment on my writes.I would be happy with people reading them if it were me.And if you don't want to comment anymore than don't. Thank you A.
re: re: Re: Ich Liebe Dich
29th Dec 2013 2:10am
thank you .... ur bold
a lesson well taken
only i feel comments
add to a persons desire
to compose more
young lady i make selections selectively
and so i will read as done here to fore
you may or may not read me
that's ur decision
for pure
sophisticated was in a decent and good sense
all the best wishes
for a HAPPY NEW YEAR to you and ur 3 sons
a lesson well taken
only i feel comments
add to a persons desire
to compose more
young lady i make selections selectively
and so i will read as done here to fore
you may or may not read me
that's ur decision
for pure
sophisticated was in a decent and good sense
all the best wishes
for a HAPPY NEW YEAR to you and ur 3 sons
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