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The author encourages honest critique.
28th Dec 2013 11:34pm
Your haiku projects the desert Namib in my mind's eye. Torrid heat, dry wind, glistening light ... and the warm sand. Lovely and captivating write.
29th Dec 2013 10:36am
I googled the desert Namib and it's a beautiful harsh landscape ...
... My mindset at the time was more a Caribbean one ... both her and the beach she sunbathes on ...
... but your interpretation is a lovely one.
Thank you for the read.
LSP
... My mindset at the time was more a Caribbean one ... both her and the beach she sunbathes on ...
... but your interpretation is a lovely one.
Thank you for the read.
LSP
29th Dec 2013 2:30pm
That your haiku arouses and/or satisfies - and that both at the same time is possible - speaks for its beauty and depth and makes it a precious mind journey and even a warm destination. I started to write in Namibia, in January 2013 and your haiku reminded me of the first steps I took in the writing direction. Thank you!
29th Dec 2013 11:03am
In my mind, I have seen the desert Sahara, because I have been several times. Quality of your haiku where each one could find his own souvenirs in your words. Beautiful ink, LSP!
29th Dec 2013 11:29am
Thank you for your kind words ... It's always rewarding when wonderful people find journeys - experienced and new - in a writer's words.
LSP
LSP
