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In The End
Anxiety building today
My soul bound and chained
I had a nightmare about Ted Bundy last night.
He was quite scary in person
I tried to flee him but in my nightmare my soul couldn't shake him
Maybe it's a warning to me not to encourage my twisted fantasies
Because in the end reality isn't a dream.
It's a nightmare from which you can not awake
It's a dark place where demonic forces torture
Take your will to survive, with no where to hide.
I don't want to meet eternal death
Face to face, i've seen hell, scary doesn't begin to describe it
I've had a taste, in the end I want grace.
My soul bound and chained
I had a nightmare about Ted Bundy last night.
He was quite scary in person
I tried to flee him but in my nightmare my soul couldn't shake him
Maybe it's a warning to me not to encourage my twisted fantasies
Because in the end reality isn't a dream.
It's a nightmare from which you can not awake
It's a dark place where demonic forces torture
Take your will to survive, with no where to hide.
I don't want to meet eternal death
Face to face, i've seen hell, scary doesn't begin to describe it
I've had a taste, in the end I want grace.
Published 8th Feb 2011
| Edited 14th Feb 2011
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8th Feb 2011 8:24pm
8th Feb 2011 8:26pm
9th Feb 2011 2:51am
...are too kind...
My soul bound and chained...cliche
I dreamed of Ted Bundy last night.
He was quite scary in person....he was very charming in real life, that's how he got so many victims...and the expression "quite scary" is very weak given the tone you are trying to set. My cat is "quite scary"
Because in the end reality isn't a dream.
It's a nightmare from which you can not awake...a nightmare is a dream...direct contradiction.
Face to face, i've seen hell, scary doesn't begin to describe it...this is just lazy writing. You are a writer, so describe it.
I've had a taste, in the end I want grace...best line in the whole damn thing...if the rest was this solid I'd be agreeing with the comments of your friends...
My soul bound and chained...cliche
I dreamed of Ted Bundy last night.
He was quite scary in person....he was very charming in real life, that's how he got so many victims...and the expression "quite scary" is very weak given the tone you are trying to set. My cat is "quite scary"
Because in the end reality isn't a dream.
It's a nightmare from which you can not awake...a nightmare is a dream...direct contradiction.
Face to face, i've seen hell, scary doesn't begin to describe it...this is just lazy writing. You are a writer, so describe it.
I've had a taste, in the end I want grace...best line in the whole damn thing...if the rest was this solid I'd be agreeing with the comments of your friends...
9th Feb 2011 3:26pm
10th Dec 2017 2:09pm
Seems your mind obsessively digs like mine.
It also made me think of a quote from Stephen King
So do we pass the ghosts that haunt us later in our lives; they sit undramatically by the roadside like poor beggars, and we see them only from the corners of our eyes, if we see them at all. The idea that they have been waiting there for us rarely crosses our minds. Yet they do wait, and when we have passed, they gather up their bundles of memory and fall in behind, treading in our footsteps and catching up, little by little.
It also made me think of a quote from Stephen King
So do we pass the ghosts that haunt us later in our lives; they sit undramatically by the roadside like poor beggars, and we see them only from the corners of our eyes, if we see them at all. The idea that they have been waiting there for us rarely crosses our minds. Yet they do wait, and when we have passed, they gather up their bundles of memory and fall in behind, treading in our footsteps and catching up, little by little.
10th Dec 2017 5:52pm
thank you beautiful Jade yes my mind does dig.. this one is slightly personal as it shines light where my psyche sometimes goes & my fear of it..
love the Stephen King quote so hauntingly appropriate..
love Crim
love the Stephen King quote so hauntingly appropriate..
love Crim
10th Dec 2017 5:57pm
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