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Leather Tongue
I love to feel your soft, masculine lips
Grazing across my wide, feminine hips.
Tongue licking at my secretive dips;
Only sounds I can hear are the sounds of sips.
Waist held tight with strong hands, no slip grip.
You say the taste of me is like a high-proof nip.
Your tongue is lashing at me like a leather whip.
Leather tongue licking, flogging my little zip.
Grazing across my wide, feminine hips.
Tongue licking at my secretive dips;
Only sounds I can hear are the sounds of sips.
Waist held tight with strong hands, no slip grip.
You say the taste of me is like a high-proof nip.
Your tongue is lashing at me like a leather whip.
Leather tongue licking, flogging my little zip.
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Re: Leather Tongue
Anonymous
25th Dec 2013 4:00am
What a creative write! Looking forward to more of your writes!
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27th Dec 2013 3:00am
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Anonymous
27th Dec 2013 2:10pm
Nice flow, love to make such kisses...
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Re: Leather Tongue
30th Dec 2013 7:52pm
That could have been a response from the woman in my own (later) poem - which you commented on - "Juicy as a Fruit". (Until now I was unaware you had written it and published it on Christmas Day.)
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1st Jan 2014 10:51pm
Kisses are Beautiful, like this piece sweets!!!
Loved it!!!
Sir Lancelott
Loved it!!!
Sir Lancelott
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Re: Leather Tongue
6th Feb 2014 12:54pm
Another hit! Great Job. They can't all be great but this poem has all the makings of a great poem and surly a very good read.
Cap't Ron
Cap't Ron
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