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love me like a poem
‘Love Poems’ boldly engraved on the cover
of the book she left behind
the only thing she forgot
I opened it. the pages were blank
band of gold: ring of fire
burned like her kisses used to
in the garden, the wildflowers bloomed
they smelled like her
I trampled over them, heard their screams
watched them die under my boots
from my window, I see the cathedral
silver tones of the chimes – ‘Ave Maria’
all my blaspheming cries
begin with F
the stars spelled out her name
across the black tarmac where heaven hides
I took my deerhunter special
12 gauge, double barrel
shot them down, one by one
tell me again
how to write
love poems
Published 23rd Dec 2013
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23rd Dec 2013 10:29am
23rd Dec 2013 10:37am
A wonderful despondent love poem- the richness and variety of responses are beautifully controlled and expressed.
23rd Dec 2013 10:58am
You have it in your hand John. I ached as I read brother. I read again. And ached some more. I really, really feel this. I believe I will hang on to this a while. Thanking you Sir.
Anonymous
23rd Dec 2013 2:49pm
gee whiza....think i've joined the dyck! :P rM
23rd Dec 2013 3:42pm
nice
could qualify as erotica
since u show a nude woman
ung kids will also see
u may like to reclassify
could qualify as erotica
since u show a nude woman
ung kids will also see
u may like to reclassify
23rd Dec 2013 4:08pm
23rd Dec 2013 4:28pm
23rd Dec 2013 6:13pm
Now this is a passionate piece of poetry, Ave Maria being one of the most endeared masterpieces ever written in song. A rendition to remember, John :)~
24th Dec 2013 00:41am
Ava Maria and a 12 gauge ... Deadly combinations when it comes to love. Brilliant work!
LSP
LSP
Anonymous
24th Dec 2013 3:40am
Try as you will, some things cannot be eradicated... all you can do is feel, and accept, and move on...
this moved me...
this moved me...
24th Dec 2013 10:13pm
I trampled over them, heard their screams
watched them die under my boots
what a lovely figure u seem to have trampled
watched them die under my boots
what a lovely figure u seem to have trampled
25th Dec 2013 5:50pm
Palpatable agony, captivating pain spiced with a dash of rage ... Passionate ink! Devoured it!
3rd May 2014 6:44pm
