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A Girl Named Ana
I met a girl last summer
Delicacy of a china doll
Just as perfect too
An anomaly to me
I loved her the first day
Can i be perfect like you?
But her sweetness turned sould quick
her demands became heavy
You're still perfect to me
stuck by her through the days
But her hot words burned deep, you know;
Im speaking of a girl with no empathy
Am I perfect yet, Ana, look at me ?
Delicacy of a china doll
Just as perfect too
An anomaly to me
I loved her the first day
Can i be perfect like you?
But her sweetness turned sould quick
her demands became heavy
You're still perfect to me
stuck by her through the days
But her hot words burned deep, you know;
Im speaking of a girl with no empathy
Am I perfect yet, Ana, look at me ?
Published 23rd Dec 2013
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24th Dec 2013 3:20pm
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31st Dec 2013 4:12am
so we wonder if you see that girl in yourself, & if callousness is part of perfection...
16th Jun 2014 5:05am
you have such a great interesting tone in your work...it has me all over the place with each new work I read...my mind spins in awe...
