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I Wish He ~
In a rain storm
my white cotton
shirt clings to me...
God I wish he was
my shirt!
Flower crystals fall
from the sky I
stand with my mouth
open wide...
Sweet Jesus I wish he
was those crystals!
In a open field thunder
rolls I wait for the heat
lightning to strike me...
Oh where is he I wish he
could embrace me!
my white cotton
shirt clings to me...
God I wish he was
my shirt!
Flower crystals fall
from the sky I
stand with my mouth
open wide...
Sweet Jesus I wish he
was those crystals!
In a open field thunder
rolls I wait for the heat
lightning to strike me...
Oh where is he I wish he
could embrace me!
Published 22nd Dec 2013
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Beautiful words and thoughts
your breasts will weld with his
then what will you do
if inside you
he solders his
cling on dear one
sex is real fun
till it’s done
Tommie Lynn (tommielynn)
the poetess wonder here
your breasts will weld with his
then what will you do
if inside you
he solders his
cling on dear one
sex is real fun
till it’s done
Tommie Lynn (tommielynn)
the poetess wonder here
22nd Dec 2013 6:11pm
22nd Dec 2013 7:02pm
22nd Dec 2013 6:36pm
Fantastic! I love the idea of those thoughts going through your head at those described moments. Great job my friend!
22nd Dec 2013 7:03pm
22nd Dec 2013 7:35pm
A beautiful work my dear. You mind and pen are getting along famously. Your a pleasure to read Tommie. Thank you babe. XO
22nd Dec 2013 7:43pm
So greatful you stop by and check me out...thanks for the kind words as well.Thank you TS. XO
22nd Dec 2013 8:18pm
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22nd Dec 2013 10:16pm
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Dec 2013 10:39pm
22nd Dec 2013 10:36pm
یہ بہت اچھا اور sexee rM!!!!!
22nd Dec 2013 10:50pm
Anonymous
24th Dec 2013 3:51pm
MMm Mm..i want to read your mind more often!..;)
Very artfully written Tommie, deliciously sensuous without vulgarity..Excellent! :)
~Tom
Very artfully written Tommie, deliciously sensuous without vulgarity..Excellent! :)
~Tom
24th Dec 2013 4:25pm
