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Winter Sunday
Winter Sunday
my thoughts
surround me
like a white mist
Streaming along
blending with
illusions and
my fond heart
Shapes of plenty
reaching my soul
I learn to feel
and take control
my thoughts
surround me
like a white mist
Streaming along
blending with
illusions and
my fond heart
Shapes of plenty
reaching my soul
I learn to feel
and take control
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Re: Winter Sunday
22nd Dec 2013 5:25pm
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22nd Dec 2013 6:08pm
Re: Winter Sunday
There is a lot of depth in this piece. I sense that, perhaps, you're finally feeling some peace, maybe? "I learn to feel and take control" is a great and profound line.
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re: Re: Winter Sunday
22nd Dec 2013 6:51pm
I thought so too GW.Living for me and nobody else.Taking control of my own future!Thanks GW.
Re: Winter Sunday
22nd Dec 2013 7:38pm
I believe good things are happening girl. It's coming out in your ink. All power Tommie Lynn. xo
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22nd Dec 2013 7:45pm
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