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Behold
Roses,daffodils and daisies...
flowers everywhere,
begin to bloom
whenever you smile.
Bluebirds,robins,chickadees
and a thousand others
start to tweet in harmony
when your voice rings.
Bunnies,kittens and puppies
all the fluffy little ones
joyfully dance and prance
when they see you coming.
Hearts,minds and souls
all things inside
begin to melt
as your eyes look into theirs.
The midday sun shines brighter,
skies turn royal blue
and clouds are puffier
when you come outside.
The birds and the bees,
flowers and the trees,
babies and puppies,
men and women everywhere
they all say..."Behold".
flowers everywhere,
begin to bloom
whenever you smile.
Bluebirds,robins,chickadees
and a thousand others
start to tweet in harmony
when your voice rings.
Bunnies,kittens and puppies
all the fluffy little ones
joyfully dance and prance
when they see you coming.
Hearts,minds and souls
all things inside
begin to melt
as your eyes look into theirs.
The midday sun shines brighter,
skies turn royal blue
and clouds are puffier
when you come outside.
The birds and the bees,
flowers and the trees,
babies and puppies,
men and women everywhere
they all say..."Behold".
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21st Dec 2013 5:48am
Yes, they will cos the beauty of creation is every where....good read, Hashman.
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Anonymous
21st Dec 2013 7:45am
Beautiful lovely ode on life and love :)
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21st Dec 2013 12:36pm
Yup, it's official you got that 'Romantic' thing too dude!
welcome to the club! lol... Very nicely done bro. N hey
you had to know it'd be a hit when you included puppies! lol
welcome to the club! lol... Very nicely done bro. N hey
you had to know it'd be a hit when you included puppies! lol
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21st Dec 2013 8:08pm
Yes puppies and bunnies can't go wrong,a big fat kiss for you brother lol...thank you my friend :)
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21st Dec 2013 11:51pm
Go head Hash, this is a beautiful telling piece of how lovely men and women are. We all need to Behold the beauty in us. Excellent ink my friend!
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22nd Dec 2013 00:11am
This lends itself well to the unseasonably warm winter I'm having. It's not complicated, but runs deep. I most like the penultimate stanza. If you can find a place with clean, agreeable air, then outdoors is the place to be. It's the most effective cure for depression. Some may not believe it, but I love puppies n' kittens, & they love me right back.
Keep up the good spirits, Hashman.
Keep up the good spirits, Hashman.
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22nd Dec 2013 11:10am
Thank you very much Mr.Scrapes...just like the puppies and kittens I'm loving you right back (peace to you)
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Aww ... that's sweet and so nice! Put a smile on my face, too. She and your praise on (to? for? GOSH!) her!
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