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Re: Free fall - Senryu
Anonymous
20th Dec 2013 10:32pm
excellent! Miss Chi..just enough mystery with equal promise ;) xo
~Tom
~Tom
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re: Re: Free fall - Senryu
21st Dec 2013 4:57pm
Thank you, dear Tom! A free fall promises at least some time to rethink your life AND a neat exitus :-).
Re: Free fall - Senryu
21st Dec 2013 00:03am
I see myself on the edge....you on the other side...and then who knows....very nice!! :)
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21st Dec 2013 4:48pm
Re: Free fall - Senryu
21st Dec 2013 00:42am
re: Re: Free fall - Senryu
21st Dec 2013 4:50pm
It always is when you dance at the edge of a precipice, Sara :-). Thank you for you comment!
Re: Free fall - Senryu
21st Dec 2013 1:25am
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21st Dec 2013 4:52pm
I love it at least (mostly)straight :-) The truth is a different matter :-). Glad about your comment straight comment!
Re: Free fall - Senryu
21st Dec 2013 2:02am
as the loudspeakers blast out
on the underground over here...
Mind The Gap..:)
nice work, as usual, Chi...
on the underground over here...
Mind The Gap..:)
nice work, as usual, Chi...
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re: Re: Free fall - Senryu
21st Dec 2013 4:58pm
Hahaha! That's hilarious! Mind the gap is real funny. I love your English humor. Thanks for the laugh and your lovely comment, as always.
Re: Free fall - Senryu
Anonymous
21st Dec 2013 7:50am
Perhaps somethings are preprogrammed, sometimes we have to take that chance.
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re: Re: Free fall - Senryu
21st Dec 2013 5:01pm
In free fall we could at least take the chance to learn how to fly :-)! Yes, Vee, you are totally right!
Re: Free fall - Senryu
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2013 7:11am
Ooooops, from the burning flames into a free fall...ouch....(dont forget your parachute, Chi!)
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re: Re: Free fall - Senryu
25th Dec 2013 5:22pm
Live is the biggest cheater, isn't it? But cats do have 9 lives. I've some to spare though not many ... So thanks for you comment and for the parachute reminder, dear Liz!
Re: Free fall - Senryu
23rd Dec 2013 5:19pm
In the words of (Tom Petty) one of my favorites " Gonna leave this world for awhile "
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re: Re: Free fall - Senryu
25th Dec 2013 5:24pm
For awhile ... So you recommend to believe in resurrection? Thank you for the tip :-)! And your deep comment ...
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23rd Dec 2013 8:53pm
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25th Dec 2013 5:27pm
Oh, yes, that's so right! Words can build bridges which easily collapse under the pressure of the silence of unspokenness ... Thank you, John, for your thoughtful comment!
Re: Free fall - Senryu
25th Dec 2013 7:06pm
or as said in a song, "take the space between us and fill it up some way"...
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re: Re: Free fall - Senryu
25th Dec 2013 7:50pm
If there is sufficient "material" to fill the space, you're lucky. If not ... "Mind the gap"!
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Re: Free fall - Senryu
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29th Dec 2013 10:42pm
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29th Dec 2013 10:44pm
Re: Free fall - Senryu
15th Mar 2014 00:25am
loved the image, but even more i loved how you intertwined a senryu and a haiku and still kept it in form!
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re: Re: Free fall - Senryu
15th Mar 2014 8:07pm
Thank you so much for stopping by and reading me! Appreciate your lovely comment!